Thank you for your interest in the game. Your application has been reviewed and the mods would like to request revisions in the following areas:
- The personality needs some expansion. It is quite brief and doesn't allow the reader a glimpse into the character's manner of thinking. We would like to see more analysis of the character's thought process.
- Some elaboration on Gamma's personality, especially as it regards his interactions with others. How does his propensity for lying and trolling affect his relationships?
Feel free to ask for any clarification you may need on these topics and thank you again for your interest.
Revision Needed
Thank you for your interest in the game. Your application has been reviewed and the mods would like to request revisions in the following areas:
- The personality needs some expansion. It is quite brief and doesn't allow the reader a glimpse into the character's manner of thinking. We would like to see more analysis of the character's thought process.
- Some elaboration on Gamma's personality, especially as it regards his interactions with others. How does his propensity for lying and trolling affect his relationships?
Feel free to ask for any clarification you may need on these topics and thank you again for your interest.