mercenarymayhem: (Mercenary Mayhem)
mercenarymayhem ([personal profile] mercenarymayhem) wrote 2015-05-08 06:54 pm (UTC)

Revisions

R3visi0n R3qu3st

Thank you for your interest in the game. Your application has been reviewed and the mods would like to request revisions in the following areas:

- The sample features extensive interaction with an NPC and little introspection. We would like to see some more insight into the character's thought process and how she would behave on Adaptive.

Feel free to ask for any clarification you may need on these topics and thank you again for your interest.

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